I have finally finished Ari's baby book (only a year late) and I just completed the final page in the book.
I've been scrapping on this so long that I could really use some constructive criticism on it.

Thanks!



http://www.prestophoto.com/photos/image/2069503/20130


Kit Used: "Rule My World" by Irene Alexeeva (Scrappers Guide Premier Member Kit - Feb '09)
I find the kit name appropriate since Ari really does rule my world.

I think it looks great Jane.

perfect page. You do such a nice job on all your pages.
Tina B

Excellent job. I love it!!!!

looks great jane!!

Thanks everyone!

Now, are you sure it isn't too busy? I tend more to the "plain jane" stuff, so this was a stretch for me. Plus its so hard to make a masculine page not look too girly. I don't want him to be looking at it in 10 years and being embarrassed by it.

I think the color scheme is perfect. Not girly at all. The layout ,poem and picture choices are fabulous. The only think I could even consider changing is the upc loving you tag at the bottom. I find it a bit distracting from the wonderful picture and poem. But that is just me.

Speaking as a man who is 180 degrees from girly, I did not find it girly in the least.

I really like it, won't embarass him at all

I showed it to Chance who is 15 and asked him if it would embarrass him it it was a page in a book for him if I showed it to a girlfriend now or in the future and he said "No, it's a cool page. Not embarrassing at all." He also went on the name several pictures of him that if I used in a book he would now show but that page he would. So there is your answer, it won't be an embarrassing page when he gets older.