Hello,
My name is Georgi and I am not a designer but currently I am designing a header for an email.
Email is dedicated to shops (business to business). I need advices and opinions. I attached, what I have now.
The most important topics to discuss:
Saturation/level of Magenta side
Text position
Empty space
I dislike the part beginning with "Buy" and ending with "September". How can I make it better/redo?




I didn't find the right solution from the internet.
References:
https://forums.digitalpoint.com/threads ... r.2811151/

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