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Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:50 pm
by kimi_boo
Here are the front and back of the "Save the Date" card I made for the kids.
They have to go to print today (sale ends) and I am nervous that I have left something out or worse, they look like crap.
I don't want to post on my blog. I don't want them copied but I feel safe posting them here.
So let me know if you see something that should be moved or changed?




oh, the black area is what will be cropped at printing.

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:00 pm
by AngelicKim
I think it looks great. However, there is something about the "n" with the font that you used on the back for their names that bugs me. Beautiful font but the n's look like m's or w's or something. That's just me. Other than that its beautiful.

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:15 pm
by me429sb
They look fine to me Kimi. Good job. :thumbsup:

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:25 pm
by MichelB
Should not it be 'Louisiana' instead of 'Lousiana' in the back? Missing 'i' ?

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:30 pm
by kimi_boo
Kim... she picked the font. Not much I can do there.
Michel..... a HUGE kiss and thank you!!

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:31 pm
by Russinator
I'm with Kim on the "n" - other than that (and the correct spelling of Louisiana) I think they are excellent.

You did a great job - The kids will be very proud.

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:39 pm
by AngelicKim
MichelB wrote: Should not it be 'Louisiana' instead of 'Lousiana' in the back? Missing 'i' ?


hmmm, I kept staring at Louisiana and thinking it didn't look right but didn't catch it. Good catch Michel.

Kimi, what font is that? It's really pretty provided you don't need to an n. lol

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:43 pm
by MichelB
AngelicKim wrote:
Kimi, what font is that? It's really pretty provided you don't need to an n. lol


Well, they chose the font... and the 'n' at the end of the words is elegant, but not so for the one in the middle of the name.
Great work and I love this font :thumbsup:

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:58 pm
by kimi_boo
ok... Louisiana is fixed.
I am not worried too much about the n looking like a m.
it is their names and people will know who they are. :bigwink:

Kim the font is Bickham script fancy.

Michel... what part in the middle of their names?
the and sign or the letter D behind the names?

Re: Looking for feedback?????

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:19 pm
by MichelB
kimi_boo wrote: ok... Louisiana is fixed.
I am not worried too much about the n looking like a m.
it is their names and people will know who they are. :bigwink:

Kim the font is Bickham script fancy.

Michel... what part in the middle of their names?
the and sign or the letter D behind the names?


I meant the 'n' in 'Swiney', but that does not matter much: 'people know who they are'