but do u think my edges are too white looking?
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
It looks like you used the glass posted by Tina and that glass had "white edges" to start with.
I've never done a "picture in a glass" before so can't rely on personal experience. You could try to tone down the white on the glass before you insert your "people image", or you could try after the fact if you think it is distracting. Never having done it, I have no idea which would work best.
If you want to tone it down, try the method I posted on your white vignette thread. Put a 50% gray layer on top, change the blend mode to overlay and then paint with black over the white. Paint at about 22% opacity and use multiple strokes to build up the effect.
Personally, I like what you have done just as posted.
Rusty